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Hey. I am an amatuer animator. If anyone has any tips they would be helpful
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Very cool. This was very good. Im thinking this is FBF and it looks pretty smooth. The sword effects and the 3d shapes were a cool addition. only thing i can think of you to improve is the background. I really like the hole in the wall with cracks you should have done that with all the holes.
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You even said it yourself that this was crappy. Why would you upload this? Horrible animation techniques and horrible drawing. Sorry for being harsh, but if you want to upload something try to put some time in it, so it will actually be worth someones time to watch.
Here are some tips:
more frames
smoother transitions and movement
create a background that looks cool and is pleasing to the eye
don't just put it on a continuous loop when its that short
Author's Response:
lol I know, I just figured out what Layers were today, so I tried to use them.
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This flash wasn't too bad. Although it is made of sprites :( The interesting story line is what is keeping this thing at a 4/5. If you do decide to make another one, change those black text boxes! They do not match the background and scenery and kind of ruin it. The color changing text was a good idea but its better to have a different font than times new roman and to have name labels.
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this is not a flash animation. upload it to youtube or something. its not that bad of claymation, but try to make it better so u dont get rated bad.
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this is pretty cool. i like it. pretty decent drawings.
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THANKS
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thsee are awesome. i like them a ton. keep them coming. these deserve a 5/5/
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you definitely have talent!! did u make all of this in flash??
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not to be mean. but i can tell u are still learning flash. dont worry i am too. no hard feelings about this review i hope. keep it up. youll get better.
Author's Response:
thanx man...i going to get better tho
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lol.
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thanks X3
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nice work dude. that was awesome animation. the drawings were very! good!.
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